Maki XIII, Shimo

Momodzutafu1Minu no kuni noTakakita noKukuri no miya nitsuki ni hi ni5yukamashi sato woari to kikitewaga kayohi-ji noOkiso yamaMinu no yama10nabike tohito ha fumedomokaku yore tohito ha tsukedomokokoro naki15yama noOkiso yamaMinu no yama.

Momodzutafu1Minu no kuni noTakakita noKukuri no miya nitsuki ni hi ni5yukamashi sato woari to kikitewaga kayohi-ji noOkiso yamaMinu no yama10nabike tohito ha fumedomokaku yore tohito ha tsukedomokokoro naki15yama noOkiso yamaMinu no yama.

Momodzutafu1Minu no kuni noTakakita noKukuri no miya nitsuki ni hi ni5yukamashi sato woari to kikitewaga kayohi-ji noOkiso yamaMinu no yama10nabike tohito ha fumedomokaku yore tohito ha tsukedomokokoro naki15yama noOkiso yamaMinu no yama.

Momodzutafu1

Minu no kuni no

Takakita no

Kukuri no miya ni

tsuki ni hi ni5

yukamashi sato wo

ari to kikite

waga kayohi-ji no

Okiso yama

Minu no yama10

nabike to

hito ha fumedomo

kaku yore to

hito ha tsukedomo

kokoro naki15

yama no

Okiso yama

Minu no yama.

1-7 introductory.

6yukamashi, desirable to visit, not in itself but because a fair maid dwells there.

8-14 declare difficulty of traffic with his love; 15 to end, complain of the hills that bar his way to her; 11, 12 and 13, 14 reverse the order of these couplets,hito ha fumedomo nabike to (itte) …and they are more intelligible.

Formomodzutafusee List m. k.

Wotomera ga1woke ni taretaruumiwonasuNagato no ura niasa nagi ni5michi kuru shiho noyufu nagi niyose kuru nami nosono shiho noiya masumasu ni10sono nami noiya shikushiku niwagimoko nikohitsutsu kuretaAgo no umi no15ariso no uhe nihamana tsumuama wotome domounagaseruhire mo teru-gani20te ni makerutama mo yurara nishirotahe nosode furu miye tsuahi ’mofurashi mo!25

Wotomera ga1woke ni taretaruumiwonasuNagato no ura niasa nagi ni5michi kuru shiho noyufu nagi niyose kuru nami nosono shiho noiya masumasu ni10sono nami noiya shikushiku niwagimoko nikohitsutsu kuretaAgo no umi no15ariso no uhe nihamana tsumuama wotome domounagaseruhire mo teru-gani20te ni makerutama mo yurara nishirotahe nosode furu miye tsuahi ’mofurashi mo!25

Wotomera ga1woke ni taretaruumiwonasuNagato no ura niasa nagi ni5michi kuru shiho noyufu nagi niyose kuru nami nosono shiho noiya masumasu ni10sono nami noiya shikushiku niwagimoko nikohitsutsu kuretaAgo no umi no15ariso no uhe nihamana tsumuama wotome domounagaseruhire mo teru-gani20te ni makerutama mo yurara nishirotahe nosode furu miye tsuahi ’mofurashi mo!25

Wotomera ga1

woke ni taretaru

umiwonasu

Nagato no ura ni

asa nagi ni5

michi kuru shiho no

yufu nagi ni

yose kuru nami no

sono shiho no

iya masumasu ni10

sono nami no

iya shikushiku ni

wagimoko ni

kohitsutsu kureta

Ago no umi no15

ariso no uhe ni

hamana tsumu

ama wotome domo

unagaseru

hire mo teru-gani20

te ni makeru

tama mo yurara ni

shirotahe no

sode furu miye tsu

ahi ’mofurashi mo!25

1-3 form a sort of m. k. tonaga(Nagato);nagameans long, and the m. k. implies ‘long as the thread of the ball of yarn in a girl’s basket’.

20gani=sama,yô.

Forumiwonasusee List m. k.

Ama hashi no1nagaku mo ga motakayama motakaku mo ga moTsukuyomi no5motaru wochi-midzui-tori-kitekimi ni matsuritewochi yeshimu mono

Ama hashi no1nagaku mo ga motakayama motakaku mo ga moTsukuyomi no5motaru wochi-midzui-tori-kitekimi ni matsuritewochi yeshimu mono

Ama hashi no1nagaku mo ga motakayama motakaku mo ga moTsukuyomi no5motaru wochi-midzui-tori-kitekimi ni matsuritewochi yeshimu mono

Ama hashi no1

nagaku mo ga mo

takayama mo

takaku mo ga mo

Tsukuyomi no5

motaru wochi-midzu

i-tori-kite

kimi ni matsurite

wochi yeshimu mono

6wochiseems to mean renovating. There is a word-play on thiswochiand the homophon in the preceding line. It is explained in (I.) ashazhime ni modoru, moto ni kaheru.

Nunakaha no1soko naru tamamotometeyeshi tama ka mohirihite5yeshi tama ka moatarashikikimi gaoyuraku woshi mo!

Nunakaha no1soko naru tamamotometeyeshi tama ka mohirihite5yeshi tama ka moatarashikikimi gaoyuraku woshi mo!

Nunakaha no1soko naru tamamotometeyeshi tama ka mohirihite5yeshi tama ka moatarashikikimi gaoyuraku woshi mo!

Nunakaha no1

soko naru tama

motomete

yeshi tama ka mo

hirihite5

yeshi tama ka mo

atarashiki

kimi ga

oyuraku woshi mo!

7atarashiki, here not ‘new’ but =oshimubeshi, what is prized, loved, regretted. See N. 362, where Dr. Aston so translatesatarashiki Winabe no takumi, the much-to-be-regretted carpenter. But the epithet here may refer towi(well), part of the name Winabe, and probably means fresh.Takumi, however, is more than ‘carpenter’, rather ‘builder’ or ‘architect’.

9oyuraku=oyu koto, fact of being or growing old.

Shikishima no1Yamato no kuni nihito saha nimichite aredomofujinami no5omohi matsuharuwakakusanoomohi tsuki ni shikimi ga me nikohi ya akasamu10nagaki kono yo wo!

Shikishima no1Yamato no kuni nihito saha nimichite aredomofujinami no5omohi matsuharuwakakusanoomohi tsuki ni shikimi ga me nikohi ya akasamu10nagaki kono yo wo!

Shikishima no1Yamato no kuni nihito saha nimichite aredomofujinami no5omohi matsuharuwakakusanoomohi tsuki ni shikimi ga me nikohi ya akasamu10nagaki kono yo wo!

Shikishima no1

Yamato no kuni ni

hito saha ni

michite aredomo

fujinami no5

omohi matsuharu

wakakusano

omohi tsuki ni shi

kimi ga me ni

kohi ya akasamu10

nagaki kono yo wo!

9mealmost = person.

10 Readakasamuwithyo wo.

The m. k.wakakusano(7) applies tokimi(9).

Akitsushima1Yamato no kuni hakami kara tokotoage senu kunishikaredomo5a ha kotoage suame tsuchi nokami mo hanahadawaga omofukokoro shirazu ya10[yuku kage no]tsuki mo he-yukebatamakagiruhi mo kasanariteomohe ka mo15mune yasukaranukofure ka mokokoro no itakisuwe tsuhi nikimi ni ahazuba20waga inochi noikeramu kihamikohitsutsu moare ha wataramumasokagami25tada-me kimi woahi miteba kosoaga kohi yamame.Ohobuneno1omohi-tanomerukimi yuwe nitsukusu kokoro hawoshikeku mo nashi!5

Akitsushima1Yamato no kuni hakami kara tokotoage senu kunishikaredomo5a ha kotoage suame tsuchi nokami mo hanahadawaga omofukokoro shirazu ya10[yuku kage no]tsuki mo he-yukebatamakagiruhi mo kasanariteomohe ka mo15mune yasukaranukofure ka mokokoro no itakisuwe tsuhi nikimi ni ahazuba20waga inochi noikeramu kihamikohitsutsu moare ha wataramumasokagami25tada-me kimi woahi miteba kosoaga kohi yamame.Ohobuneno1omohi-tanomerukimi yuwe nitsukusu kokoro hawoshikeku mo nashi!5

Akitsushima1Yamato no kuni hakami kara tokotoage senu kunishikaredomo5a ha kotoage suame tsuchi nokami mo hanahadawaga omofukokoro shirazu ya10[yuku kage no]tsuki mo he-yukebatamakagiruhi mo kasanariteomohe ka mo15mune yasukaranukofure ka mokokoro no itakisuwe tsuhi nikimi ni ahazuba20waga inochi noikeramu kihamikohitsutsu moare ha wataramumasokagami25tada-me kimi woahi miteba kosoaga kohi yamame.

Akitsushima1

Yamato no kuni ha

kami kara to

kotoage senu kuni

shikaredomo5

a ha kotoage su

ame tsuchi no

kami mo hanahada

waga omofu

kokoro shirazu ya10

[yuku kage no]

tsuki mo he-yukeba

tamakagiru

hi mo kasanarite

omohe ka mo15

mune yasukaranu

kofure ka mo

kokoro no itaki

suwe tsuhi ni

kimi ni ahazuba20

waga inochi no

ikeramu kihami

kohitsutsu mo

are ha wataramu

masokagami25

tada-me kimi wo

ahi miteba koso

aga kohi yamame.

Ohobuneno1omohi-tanomerukimi yuwe nitsukusu kokoro hawoshikeku mo nashi!5

Ohobuneno1

omohi-tanomeru

kimi yuwe ni

tsukusu kokoro ha

woshikeku mo nashi!5

5 i.e.kami no kuni.

4kotoage, declare, announce—perhaps with neg. sense of ‘indescribable’.

8 Readwaga hanahada omofu.

15, 17ka moalmost =mo gana.

24wataramu, pass one’s days.

28yamame(yamamu—yamu), cease, stop.

5nashi, written with the character, read homophonallynashi(pear), is here the negative copula.

Forakitsushima,tamakagiru,ohobunenosee List m. k.

Ashiharano1Midzuho no kuni hakamu nagarakotoage senu kunishikaredomo5kotoage so aga surukoto sakikuma sakiku mase totsutsumi nakusakiku imasaba10ariso namiarite mo mimu toi-ho-he namichihe nami shiki nikotoage so aga suru!15

Ashiharano1Midzuho no kuni hakamu nagarakotoage senu kunishikaredomo5kotoage so aga surukoto sakikuma sakiku mase totsutsumi nakusakiku imasaba10ariso namiarite mo mimu toi-ho-he namichihe nami shiki nikotoage so aga suru!15

Ashiharano1Midzuho no kuni hakamu nagarakotoage senu kunishikaredomo5kotoage so aga surukoto sakikuma sakiku mase totsutsumi nakusakiku imasaba10ariso namiarite mo mimu toi-ho-he namichihe nami shiki nikotoage so aga suru!15

Ashiharano1

Midzuho no kuni ha

kamu nagara

kotoage senu kuni

shikaredomo5

kotoage so aga suru

koto sakiku

ma sakiku mase to

tsutsumi naku

sakiku imasaba10

ariso nami

arite mo mimu to

i-ho-he nami

chihe nami shiki ni

kotoage so aga suru!15

4, 6koto(koto-age) is here words, language, in 7, thing, affair.Koto-ageis explained (I) astoku ni toritate ifu, make special declaration.

11ariso namiis a word-play connected withari(te).

Inishihe no1ihitsugi kurakukohi surebayasukaranu mono totamanowono5tsugite ha ihedowotomera gakokoro wo shiranisoko shiramuyoshi mo nakereba10natsusobiku……omohi-nadzumikarikomonokokoro mo shinu nihito shirezu15motona so kofuruiki no wo ni shite!

Inishihe no1ihitsugi kurakukohi surebayasukaranu mono totamanowono5tsugite ha ihedowotomera gakokoro wo shiranisoko shiramuyoshi mo nakereba10natsusobiku……omohi-nadzumikarikomonokokoro mo shinu nihito shirezu15motona so kofuruiki no wo ni shite!

Inishihe no1ihitsugi kurakukohi surebayasukaranu mono totamanowono5tsugite ha ihedowotomera gakokoro wo shiranisoko shiramuyoshi mo nakereba10natsusobiku……omohi-nadzumikarikomonokokoro mo shinu nihito shirezu15motona so kofuruiki no wo ni shite!

Inishihe no1

ihitsugi kuraku

kohi sureba

yasukaranu mono to

tamanowono5

tsugite ha ihedo

wotomera ga

kokoro wo shirani

soko shiramu

yoshi mo nakereba10

natsusobiku

omohi-nadzumi

karikomono

kokoro mo shinu ni

hito shirezu15

motona so kofuru

iki no wo ni shite!

2kuraku=karu.

11natsusobiku(a m. k.) is perhaps a word-jingle withnadzu[mi]; some lines are lost here.

13komois Zizania aquatica.

16, 17 Syntactically the order of these two lines may be reversed.

Fortamanowono,natsusobiku,karikomonosee List m. k.

Aratamano1toshi ha ki-saritetamadzusanotsukahi no konebakasumitatsu5nagaki haru hi woame tsuchi niomohi-tarahashitarachinenohaha no kafu ko no10mayo komoriiki-dzuki watariwaga kofurukokoro no uchi wohito ni ihamu15mono ni shi aranebamatsu ga ne nomatsu koto tohomiamadzutafuhi no kurenureba20shirotahenowaga koromode motohorite nurenu.Kaku nomi shi1ahi ’mohazabaamakumonoyoso ni so kimi haarubeku arikeru.5

Aratamano1toshi ha ki-saritetamadzusanotsukahi no konebakasumitatsu5nagaki haru hi woame tsuchi niomohi-tarahashitarachinenohaha no kafu ko no10mayo komoriiki-dzuki watariwaga kofurukokoro no uchi wohito ni ihamu15mono ni shi aranebamatsu ga ne nomatsu koto tohomiamadzutafuhi no kurenureba20shirotahenowaga koromode motohorite nurenu.Kaku nomi shi1ahi ’mohazabaamakumonoyoso ni so kimi haarubeku arikeru.5

Aratamano1toshi ha ki-saritetamadzusanotsukahi no konebakasumitatsu5nagaki haru hi woame tsuchi niomohi-tarahashitarachinenohaha no kafu ko no10mayo komoriiki-dzuki watariwaga kofurukokoro no uchi wohito ni ihamu15mono ni shi aranebamatsu ga ne nomatsu koto tohomiamadzutafuhi no kurenureba20shirotahenowaga koromode motohorite nurenu.

Aratamano1

toshi ha ki-sarite

tamadzusano

tsukahi no koneba

kasumitatsu5

nagaki haru hi wo

ame tsuchi ni

omohi-tarahashi

tarachineno

haha no kafu ko no10

mayo komori

iki-dzuki watari

waga kofuru

kokoro no uchi wo

hito ni ihamu15

mono ni shi araneba

matsu ga ne no

matsu koto tohomi

amadzutafu

hi no kurenureba20

shirotaheno

waga koromode mo

tohorite nurenu.

Kaku nomi shi1ahi ’mohazabaamakumonoyoso ni so kimi haarubeku arikeru.5

Kaku nomi shi1

ahi ’mohazaba

amakumono

yoso ni so kimi ha

arubeku arikeru.5

17, 18 Note the word-play on the twomatsu.Neis here rather trunk than root.

Foraratamano,tamadzusano,kasumitatsu,tarachineno,amadzutafu,shirotaheno,amakumonosee List m. k.

Wohari-ta no1Ayuchi no midzu woma-naku sohito ha kumu chifutokizhiku so5hito ha nomu chifukumu hito noma-naki ga gotonomu hito notokizhiku ga goto10wagimoko niaga kofuraku hayamu toki mo nashi.

Wohari-ta no1Ayuchi no midzu woma-naku sohito ha kumu chifutokizhiku so5hito ha nomu chifukumu hito noma-naki ga gotonomu hito notokizhiku ga goto10wagimoko niaga kofuraku hayamu toki mo nashi.

Wohari-ta no1Ayuchi no midzu woma-naku sohito ha kumu chifutokizhiku so5hito ha nomu chifukumu hito noma-naki ga gotonomu hito notokizhiku ga goto10wagimoko niaga kofuraku hayamu toki mo nashi.

Wohari-ta no1

Ayuchi no midzu wo

ma-naku so

hito ha kumu chifu

tokizhiku so5

hito ha nomu chifu

kumu hito no

ma-naki ga goto

nomu hito no

tokizhiku ga goto10

wagimoko ni

aga kofuraku ha

yamu toki mo nashi.

Komorikuno1Hatsuse no kaha nokami-tsu-se nii-kuhi wo uchishimo-tsu-se ni5ma-kuhi wo uchii-kuhi ni hakagami wo kakema-kuhi ni hama-tama wo kake10ma-tama nasuaga ’mofu imo mokagaminasuaga ’mofu imo moari to15ihaba kosokuni ni moihe ni mo yukametaga yuwe ka yukamu.Yo no naka wo1ushi to omohiteihe-de seruwara ya nani ni kakaherite naramu.5Toshi wataru1made ni mo hito haari chifu woitsu no ahida so moare kohi ni keru.5

Komorikuno1Hatsuse no kaha nokami-tsu-se nii-kuhi wo uchishimo-tsu-se ni5ma-kuhi wo uchii-kuhi ni hakagami wo kakema-kuhi ni hama-tama wo kake10ma-tama nasuaga ’mofu imo mokagaminasuaga ’mofu imo moari to15ihaba kosokuni ni moihe ni mo yukametaga yuwe ka yukamu.Yo no naka wo1ushi to omohiteihe-de seruwara ya nani ni kakaherite naramu.5Toshi wataru1made ni mo hito haari chifu woitsu no ahida so moare kohi ni keru.5

Komorikuno1Hatsuse no kaha nokami-tsu-se nii-kuhi wo uchishimo-tsu-se ni5ma-kuhi wo uchii-kuhi ni hakagami wo kakema-kuhi ni hama-tama wo kake10ma-tama nasuaga ’mofu imo mokagaminasuaga ’mofu imo moari to15ihaba kosokuni ni moihe ni mo yukametaga yuwe ka yukamu.

Komorikuno1

Hatsuse no kaha no

kami-tsu-se ni

i-kuhi wo uchi

shimo-tsu-se ni5

ma-kuhi wo uchi

i-kuhi ni ha

kagami wo kake

ma-kuhi ni ha

ma-tama wo kake10

ma-tama nasu

aga ’mofu imo mo

kagaminasu

aga ’mofu imo mo

ari to15

ihaba koso

kuni ni mo

ihe ni mo yukame

taga yuwe ka yukamu.

Yo no naka wo1ushi to omohiteihe-de seruwara ya nani ni kakaherite naramu.5

Yo no naka wo1

ushi to omohite

ihe-de seru

wara ya nani ni ka

kaherite naramu.5

Toshi wataru1made ni mo hito haari chifu woitsu no ahida so moare kohi ni keru.5

Toshi wataru1

made ni mo hito ha

ari chifu wo

itsu no ahida so mo

are kohi ni keru.5

1-11 is an introduction verbal not real to 12.

16 Note constructionihaba koso yukame, readkosowithyukame.

The first envoy seems distinctly of a Buddhistic cast.

Forkomorikuno,kagaminasusee List m. k.

Haru sareba1hana saki woworiaki-dzukobani no ho ni momitsuuma-sake wo5kamunabi yama noobi ni seruAsuka no kaha nohayaki se niofuru tama-mo no10uchi-nabikikokoro ha yoriteasa tsuyu nokenaba kenubekukofuraku mo15shiruku mo aherukomori-dzuma ka mo.

Haru sareba1hana saki woworiaki-dzukobani no ho ni momitsuuma-sake wo5kamunabi yama noobi ni seruAsuka no kaha nohayaki se niofuru tama-mo no10uchi-nabikikokoro ha yoriteasa tsuyu nokenaba kenubekukofuraku mo15shiruku mo aherukomori-dzuma ka mo.

Haru sareba1hana saki woworiaki-dzukobani no ho ni momitsuuma-sake wo5kamunabi yama noobi ni seruAsuka no kaha nohayaki se niofuru tama-mo no10uchi-nabikikokoro ha yoriteasa tsuyu nokenaba kenubekukofuraku mo15shiruku mo aherukomori-dzuma ka mo.

Haru sareba1

hana saki wowori

aki-dzukoba

ni no ho ni momitsu

uma-sake wo5

kamunabi yama no

obi ni seru

Asuka no kaha no

hayaki se ni

ofuru tama-mo no10

uchi-nabiki

kokoro ha yorite

asa tsuyu no

kenaba kenubeku

kofuraku mo15

shiruku mo aheru

komori-dzuma ka mo.

1-10 introductory to 11.

11 the heart inclining towards, leaning on, trusting to. The syntax is here imperfect, as is often the case in the Anthology.

Mimoro no1Kamunabi yama yutonogumoriame ha furi-kinuame-girahi5kaze sahe fukinuohokuchinoMakami no hara yushinubi-tsutsukaheri nishi hito10ihe ni itariki ya.Kaheri nishi1hito wo omofu tonubatamanosono yo ha are moi mo ne kanete ki.5

Mimoro no1Kamunabi yama yutonogumoriame ha furi-kinuame-girahi5kaze sahe fukinuohokuchinoMakami no hara yushinubi-tsutsukaheri nishi hito10ihe ni itariki ya.Kaheri nishi1hito wo omofu tonubatamanosono yo ha are moi mo ne kanete ki.5

Mimoro no1Kamunabi yama yutonogumoriame ha furi-kinuame-girahi5kaze sahe fukinuohokuchinoMakami no hara yushinubi-tsutsukaheri nishi hito10ihe ni itariki ya.

Mimoro no1

Kamunabi yama yu

tonogumori

ame ha furi-kinu

ame-girahi5

kaze sahe fukinu

ohokuchino

Makami no hara yu

shinubi-tsutsu

kaheri nishi hito10

ihe ni itariki ya.

Kaheri nishi1hito wo omofu tonubatamanosono yo ha are moi mo ne kanete ki.5

Kaheri nishi1

hito wo omofu to

nubatamano

sono yo ha are mo

i mo ne kanete ki.5

3tonogumori=tanagumori.

1 Thenishimay be taken = (i)nishi.

5 =nezariki.

Fortonogumori,ohokuchino,nubatamanosee List m. k.

Sashi-yakamu1wo-ya no shiki-ya nikaki-utemuyare komo wo shikiteuchi-woramu5shiko no shiki-te wosashi-kahetenuramu kimi yuweakanesasuhiru ha shimirani10nubatamanoyoru ha sugara nikono toko nohishi to naru madenageki-tsuru ka mo.15

Sashi-yakamu1wo-ya no shiki-ya nikaki-utemuyare komo wo shikiteuchi-woramu5shiko no shiki-te wosashi-kahetenuramu kimi yuweakanesasuhiru ha shimirani10nubatamanoyoru ha sugara nikono toko nohishi to naru madenageki-tsuru ka mo.15

Sashi-yakamu1wo-ya no shiki-ya nikaki-utemuyare komo wo shikiteuchi-woramu5shiko no shiki-te wosashi-kahetenuramu kimi yuweakanesasuhiru ha shimirani10nubatamanoyoru ha sugara nikono toko nohishi to naru madenageki-tsuru ka mo.15

Sashi-yakamu1

wo-ya no shiki-ya ni

kaki-utemu

yare komo wo shikite

uchi-woramu5

shiko no shiki-te wo

sashi-kahete

nuramu kimi yuwe

akanesasu

hiru ha shimirani10

nubatamano

yoru ha sugara ni

kono toko no

hishi to naru made

nageki-tsuru ka mo.15

2, 6shiki,shiko, common, mean.

3utemu,utsuru,sutsuru= throw away, cast off.

4yare=yabure.

5 read withshiko.

Forakanesasu,nubatamanosee List m. k.

Uchihahete1omohishi wo-nu hatohokaranusono sato-hito noshime yufu to5kikiteshi hi yoritatamaku notadzuki mo shirazuworamaku nookuka mo shirazu10nikibi nishiwaga ihe sura wokusamakuratabi-ne no gotokuomofu sora15yasukaranu mono wonageku sorasugushi yenu mono woamakumonoyukura yukura ni20ashikakinoomohi-midaretemidare wo nowoke wo nomi toaga kofuru25chihe no hitohe mohito shirezumotona ya kohimuiki no wo ni shite.

Uchihahete1omohishi wo-nu hatohokaranusono sato-hito noshime yufu to5kikiteshi hi yoritatamaku notadzuki mo shirazuworamaku nookuka mo shirazu10nikibi nishiwaga ihe sura wokusamakuratabi-ne no gotokuomofu sora15yasukaranu mono wonageku sorasugushi yenu mono woamakumonoyukura yukura ni20ashikakinoomohi-midaretemidare wo nowoke wo nomi toaga kofuru25chihe no hitohe mohito shirezumotona ya kohimuiki no wo ni shite.

Uchihahete1omohishi wo-nu hatohokaranusono sato-hito noshime yufu to5kikiteshi hi yoritatamaku notadzuki mo shirazuworamaku nookuka mo shirazu10nikibi nishiwaga ihe sura wokusamakuratabi-ne no gotokuomofu sora15yasukaranu mono wonageku sorasugushi yenu mono woamakumonoyukura yukura ni20ashikakinoomohi-midaretemidare wo nowoke wo nomi toaga kofuru25chihe no hitohe mohito shirezumotona ya kohimuiki no wo ni shite.

Uchihahete1

omohishi wo-nu ha

tohokaranu

sono sato-hito no

shime yufu to5

kikiteshi hi yori

tatamaku no

tadzuki mo shirazu

woramaku no

okuka mo shirazu10

nikibi nishi

waga ihe sura wo

kusamakura

tabi-ne no gotoku

omofu sora15

yasukaranu mono wo

nageku sora

sugushi yenu mono wo

amakumono

yukura yukura ni20

ashikakino

omohi-midarete

midare wo no

woke wo nomi to

aga kofuru25

chihe no hitohe mo

hito shirezu

motona ya kohimu

iki no wo ni shite.

1, 2uchi-hahete omohishi, sending forth one’s thoughts [of love].

7-10 are parenthetical.

12 Connected withomofu(15).

13, 14 qualifyingomofu.

27hitoseems to point to the girl symbolized in (2) aswo-nu. There is some syntactic obscurity in the text.

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[Semu sube no1tadoki wo shiraniiha ga ne nokogoshiki michi noiha-toko no5ne haheru kado niashita ni haide-wite nagekiyufu-he ni hairi-wi kohitsutsu]10shirotahenowaga koromo-de wowori-kaheshihitori shi nureba[nubatamano15kuro kami shikitehito no nuruuma i ha nezuteohobunenoyukura yukurani20omohitsutsuwaga nuru yora woyomi wo ahemu ka mo].

[Semu sube no1tadoki wo shiraniiha ga ne nokogoshiki michi noiha-toko no5ne haheru kado niashita ni haide-wite nagekiyufu-he ni hairi-wi kohitsutsu]10shirotahenowaga koromo-de wowori-kaheshihitori shi nureba[nubatamano15kuro kami shikitehito no nuruuma i ha nezuteohobunenoyukura yukurani20omohitsutsuwaga nuru yora woyomi wo ahemu ka mo].

[Semu sube no1tadoki wo shiraniiha ga ne nokogoshiki michi noiha-toko no5ne haheru kado niashita ni haide-wite nagekiyufu-he ni hairi-wi kohitsutsu]10shirotahenowaga koromo-de wowori-kaheshihitori shi nureba[nubatamano15kuro kami shikitehito no nuruuma i ha nezuteohobunenoyukura yukurani20omohitsutsuwaga nuru yora woyomi wo ahemu ka mo].

[Semu sube no1

tadoki wo shirani

iha ga ne no

kogoshiki michi no

iha-toko no5

ne haheru kado ni

ashita ni ha

ide-wite nageki

yufu-he ni ha

iri-wi kohitsutsu]10

shirotaheno

waga koromo-de wo

wori-kaheshi

hitori shi nureba

[nubatamano15

kuro kami shikite

hito no nuru

uma i ha nezute

ohobuneno

yukura yukurani20

omohitsutsu

waga nuru yora wo

yomi wo ahemu ka mo].

The bracketed portions are contained in other lays.

Forshirotaheno,nubatamano,ohobunenosee List m. k.

Ashihikino1Yamada no michi woshikitahenoutsukushi tsuma tomono ihazu5wakareshi kurebahayakahanoyukuhe mo shirazukoromodenokaheru mo shirani10uma-zhi monotachite tsumadzuki!

Ashihikino1Yamada no michi woshikitahenoutsukushi tsuma tomono ihazu5wakareshi kurebahayakahanoyukuhe mo shirazukoromodenokaheru mo shirani10uma-zhi monotachite tsumadzuki!

Ashihikino1Yamada no michi woshikitahenoutsukushi tsuma tomono ihazu5wakareshi kurebahayakahanoyukuhe mo shirazukoromodenokaheru mo shirani10uma-zhi monotachite tsumadzuki!

Ashihikino1

Yamada no michi wo

shikitaheno

utsukushi tsuma to

mono ihazu5

wakareshi kureba

hayakahano

yukuhe mo shirazu

koromodeno

kaheru mo shirani10

uma-zhi mono

tachite tsumadzuki!

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Semu sube no1tadzuki wo shiranimononofunoyaso no kokoro woame tsuchi ni5omohi tarahashitama ahabakimi kimasu ya towaga nagekuya saka no nageki10tamahokonomichi kuru hito notachi-domariika ni to tohabaihi-yaramu15tadzuki wo shiranisanidzurafukimi ga na ihabairo ni detehito shirinu-bemi20ashihikinoyama yori idzurutsuki matsu tohito ni ha ihitekimi matsu ware wo.25I-wo-mo nezu1aga ’mofu kimi haidzuku he niko yohi imase kamatedo kimasanu.5

Semu sube no1tadzuki wo shiranimononofunoyaso no kokoro woame tsuchi ni5omohi tarahashitama ahabakimi kimasu ya towaga nagekuya saka no nageki10tamahokonomichi kuru hito notachi-domariika ni to tohabaihi-yaramu15tadzuki wo shiranisanidzurafukimi ga na ihabairo ni detehito shirinu-bemi20ashihikinoyama yori idzurutsuki matsu tohito ni ha ihitekimi matsu ware wo.25I-wo-mo nezu1aga ’mofu kimi haidzuku he niko yohi imase kamatedo kimasanu.5

Semu sube no1tadzuki wo shiranimononofunoyaso no kokoro woame tsuchi ni5omohi tarahashitama ahabakimi kimasu ya towaga nagekuya saka no nageki10tamahokonomichi kuru hito notachi-domariika ni to tohabaihi-yaramu15tadzuki wo shiranisanidzurafukimi ga na ihabairo ni detehito shirinu-bemi20ashihikinoyama yori idzurutsuki matsu tohito ni ha ihitekimi matsu ware wo.25

Semu sube no1

tadzuki wo shirani

mononofuno

yaso no kokoro wo

ame tsuchi ni5

omohi tarahashi

tama ahaba

kimi kimasu ya to

waga nageku

ya saka no nageki10

tamahokono

michi kuru hito no

tachi-domari

ika ni to tohaba

ihi-yaramu15

tadzuki wo shirani

sanidzurafu

kimi ga na ihaba

iro ni dete

hito shirinu-bemi20

ashihikino

yama yori idzuru

tsuki matsu to

hito ni ha ihite

kimi matsu ware wo.25

I-wo-mo nezu1aga ’mofu kimi haidzuku he niko yohi imase kamatedo kimasanu.5

I-wo-mo nezu1

aga ’mofu kimi ha

idzuku he ni

ko yohi imase ka

matedo kimasanu.5

Formononofuno,tamahokono,sanidzurafu,ashihikinosee List m. k.

Akakoma no1umaya tatekurokoma noumaya tateteso wo kahi5aga yuku gotokuomohi tsumakokoroni noriteTakayama nomine no tawori ni10i-me tateteshishi matsu gotokutokoshiku niaga matsu kimi woinu na hoye so ne!15

Akakoma no1umaya tatekurokoma noumaya tateteso wo kahi5aga yuku gotokuomohi tsumakokoroni noriteTakayama nomine no tawori ni10i-me tateteshishi matsu gotokutokoshiku niaga matsu kimi woinu na hoye so ne!15

Akakoma no1umaya tatekurokoma noumaya tateteso wo kahi5aga yuku gotokuomohi tsumakokoroni noriteTakayama nomine no tawori ni10i-me tateteshishi matsu gotokutokoshiku niaga matsu kimi woinu na hoye so ne!15

Akakoma no1

umaya tate

kurokoma no

umaya tatete

so wo kahi5

aga yuku gotoku

omohi tsuma

kokoroni norite

Takayama no

mine no tawori ni10

i-me tatete

shishi matsu gotoku

tokoshiku ni

aga matsu kimi wo

inu na hoye so ne!15

5so=sore,kahi, feed.

10taworiseems to mean here a recess or hollow place.

Waga seko ha1matedo kimasazuama no harafurisake mirebanubatamano5yo mo fuke ni kerisayo fuketearashi no fukebatachi-matsu niwaga koromo-de ni10furu yuki hakohori watarinuima sara nikimi ki-masame yasanakadzura15nochi mo ahamu tonagusamurukokoro wo mochitemi sode mochitoko uchi-harahi20utsutsu ni hakimi ni ha ahazhiime ni daniafu to miye kosoama no tariyo ni.25

Waga seko ha1matedo kimasazuama no harafurisake mirebanubatamano5yo mo fuke ni kerisayo fuketearashi no fukebatachi-matsu niwaga koromo-de ni10furu yuki hakohori watarinuima sara nikimi ki-masame yasanakadzura15nochi mo ahamu tonagusamurukokoro wo mochitemi sode mochitoko uchi-harahi20utsutsu ni hakimi ni ha ahazhiime ni daniafu to miye kosoama no tariyo ni.25

Waga seko ha1matedo kimasazuama no harafurisake mirebanubatamano5yo mo fuke ni kerisayo fuketearashi no fukebatachi-matsu niwaga koromo-de ni10furu yuki hakohori watarinuima sara nikimi ki-masame yasanakadzura15nochi mo ahamu tonagusamurukokoro wo mochitemi sode mochitoko uchi-harahi20utsutsu ni hakimi ni ha ahazhiime ni daniafu to miye kosoama no tariyo ni.25

Waga seko ha1

matedo kimasazu

ama no hara

furisake mireba

nubatamano5

yo mo fuke ni keri

sayo fukete

arashi no fukeba

tachi-matsu ni

waga koromo-de ni10

furu yuki ha

kohori watarinu

ima sara ni

kimi ki-masame ya

sanakadzura15

nochi mo ahamu to

nagusamuru

kokoro wo mochite

mi sode mochi

toko uchi-harahi20

utsutsu ni ha

kimi ni ha ahazhi

ime ni dani

afu to miye koso

ama no tariyo ni.25

12watarinu, pass from one place or state to another—here almost auxiliary.

25 night as complete as the sky, i.e. the whole night.

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Waga seko ha1matedo kimasazukarigane motoyomite samushinubatamano5yo mo fuke ni kerisayo fuku toarashi no fukebatachi-matsu niwaga koromo-de ni10oku shimo mohi ni saye watarifuru yuki mokohori watarinuima sara ni15kimi kimasame yasanakadzuranochi mo ahamu toohobunenoomohi-tanomedo20utsutsu ni hakimi ni ha ahazhiime ni daniafu to miye kosoama no tari yo ni.25

Waga seko ha1matedo kimasazukarigane motoyomite samushinubatamano5yo mo fuke ni kerisayo fuku toarashi no fukebatachi-matsu niwaga koromo-de ni10oku shimo mohi ni saye watarifuru yuki mokohori watarinuima sara ni15kimi kimasame yasanakadzuranochi mo ahamu toohobunenoomohi-tanomedo20utsutsu ni hakimi ni ha ahazhiime ni daniafu to miye kosoama no tari yo ni.25

Waga seko ha1matedo kimasazukarigane motoyomite samushinubatamano5yo mo fuke ni kerisayo fuku toarashi no fukebatachi-matsu niwaga koromo-de ni10oku shimo mohi ni saye watarifuru yuki mokohori watarinuima sara ni15kimi kimasame yasanakadzuranochi mo ahamu toohobunenoomohi-tanomedo20utsutsu ni hakimi ni ha ahazhiime ni daniafu to miye kosoama no tari yo ni.25

Waga seko ha1

matedo kimasazu

karigane mo

toyomite samushi

nubatamano5

yo mo fuke ni keri

sayo fuku to

arashi no fukeba

tachi-matsu ni

waga koromo-de ni10

oku shimo mo

hi ni saye watari

furu yuki mo

kohori watarinu

ima sara ni15

kimi kimasame ya

sanakadzura

nochi mo ahamu to

ohobuneno

omohi-tanomedo20

utsutsu ni ha

kimi ni ha ahazhi

ime ni dani

afu to miye koso

ama no tari yo ni.25

8arashi, storm.

12hi, ice.

13yuki, snow.

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Suganoneno1nemokorogoro niaga ’moheruimo ni yoritebakoto no imi mo5naku ari koso toihahi-he woihahi hori-suwetaka-dama woma naku nuki-tari10ame tsuchi nokami wo so aga nomuita mo sube nami.Tarachineno1haha ni mo norazutsutsumerishikokoro ha yoshiwekimi ga manimani.5

Suganoneno1nemokorogoro niaga ’moheruimo ni yoritebakoto no imi mo5naku ari koso toihahi-he woihahi hori-suwetaka-dama woma naku nuki-tari10ame tsuchi nokami wo so aga nomuita mo sube nami.Tarachineno1haha ni mo norazutsutsumerishikokoro ha yoshiwekimi ga manimani.5

Suganoneno1nemokorogoro niaga ’moheruimo ni yoritebakoto no imi mo5naku ari koso toihahi-he woihahi hori-suwetaka-dama woma naku nuki-tari10ame tsuchi nokami wo so aga nomuita mo sube nami.

Suganoneno1

nemokorogoro ni

aga ’moheru

imo ni yoriteba

koto no imi mo5

naku ari koso to

ihahi-he wo

ihahi hori-suwe

taka-dama wo

ma naku nuki-tari10

ame tsuchi no

kami wo so aga nomu

ita mo sube nami.

Tarachineno1haha ni mo norazutsutsumerishikokoro ha yoshiwekimi ga manimani.5

Tarachineno1

haha ni mo norazu

tsutsumerishi

kokoro ha yoshiwe

kimi ga manimani.5

5koto no imi, prohibition of speech.

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Tamatasuki1kakenu toki nakuaga ’moherukimi ni yoritebashidzu nusa we5te ni tori-mochitetakadama woshizhi ni nuki-tariame tsuchi nokami wo so aga kofu10ita mo sube nami.

Tamatasuki1kakenu toki nakuaga ’moherukimi ni yoritebashidzu nusa we5te ni tori-mochitetakadama woshizhi ni nuki-tariame tsuchi nokami wo so aga kofu10ita mo sube nami.

Tamatasuki1kakenu toki nakuaga ’moherukimi ni yoritebashidzu nusa we5te ni tori-mochitetakadama woshizhi ni nuki-tariame tsuchi nokami wo so aga kofu10ita mo sube nami.

Tamatasuki1

kakenu toki naku

aga ’moheru

kimi ni yoriteba

shidzu nusa we5

te ni tori-mochite

takadama wo

shizhi ni nuki-tari

ame tsuchi no

kami wo so aga kofu10

ita mo sube nami.

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Ohobuneno1omohi-tanomitematsu kane noiya toho-nagakuaga ’moheru5kimi ni yoritebakoto no yuwe monaku ari koso toyufu tasukikata ni tori-kake10ihahi-he woihahi hori-suweame tsuchi nokami ni so aga nomuita mo sube nami.15

Ohobuneno1omohi-tanomitematsu kane noiya toho-nagakuaga ’moheru5kimi ni yoritebakoto no yuwe monaku ari koso toyufu tasukikata ni tori-kake10ihahi-he woihahi hori-suweame tsuchi nokami ni so aga nomuita mo sube nami.15

Ohobuneno1omohi-tanomitematsu kane noiya toho-nagakuaga ’moheru5kimi ni yoritebakoto no yuwe monaku ari koso toyufu tasukikata ni tori-kake10ihahi-he woihahi hori-suweame tsuchi nokami ni so aga nomuita mo sube nami.15

Ohobuneno1

omohi-tanomite

matsu kane no

iya toho-nagaku

aga ’moheru5

kimi ni yoriteba

koto no yuwe mo

naku ari koso to

yufu tasuki

kata ni tori-kake10

ihahi-he wo

ihahi hori-suwe

ame tsuchi no

kami ni so aga nomu

ita mo sube nami.15

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Mihakashi wo1Tsurugi no ike nohachisu ha nitamareru midzu noyukuhe naku5aga seshi toki niafuteshi touraheru kimi wona ine so tohaha kikosedomo10waga kokoroKiyosumi no ike noike no sokoare ha wasurezhitada ni afu made.15Inishihe no1kami no toki yoriahikerashiima kokoro ni motsune wasurayezu!5

Mihakashi wo1Tsurugi no ike nohachisu ha nitamareru midzu noyukuhe naku5aga seshi toki niafuteshi touraheru kimi wona ine so tohaha kikosedomo10waga kokoroKiyosumi no ike noike no sokoare ha wasurezhitada ni afu made.15Inishihe no1kami no toki yoriahikerashiima kokoro ni motsune wasurayezu!5

Mihakashi wo1Tsurugi no ike nohachisu ha nitamareru midzu noyukuhe naku5aga seshi toki niafuteshi touraheru kimi wona ine so tohaha kikosedomo10waga kokoroKiyosumi no ike noike no sokoare ha wasurezhitada ni afu made.15

Mihakashi wo1

Tsurugi no ike no

hachisu ha ni

tamareru midzu no

yukuhe naku5

aga seshi toki ni

afuteshi to

uraheru kimi wo

na ine so to

haha kikosedomo10

waga kokoro

Kiyosumi no ike no

ike no soko

are ha wasurezhi

tada ni afu made.15

Inishihe no1kami no toki yoriahikerashiima kokoro ni motsune wasurayezu!5

Inishihe no1

kami no toki yori

ahikerashi

ima kokoro ni mo

tsune wasurayezu!5

1-4 are introductory toyukuhe naku—there are several interpretations of the whole passage.

1womust be taken as equivalent tono.

6seshi toki, made, that is, appointed time.

8uraheru—the meaning of this word is obscure. It is written (in script) asahi aruoraheru, nearly equal toaru;uraheruis Motowori’s reading.

10kikosedomo=notamahedomo.

14are=ware.

Mi Yoshinu no1maki-tatsu yama nishizhi ni ofuruyama suga no ne nonemokoro ni5waga ’mofu kimi haohokimi nomake no manimanihinazakarukimi wosame ni to10muratorinoasa tachi-yukebaokuretaruare ka kohinamutabi nareba15kimi ka shinubamuihamu subesemu sube shiraniashihikinoyama no konure ni20hafutsutanowakare no amatawoshiku mo aru ka mo.

Mi Yoshinu no1maki-tatsu yama nishizhi ni ofuruyama suga no ne nonemokoro ni5waga ’mofu kimi haohokimi nomake no manimanihinazakarukimi wosame ni to10muratorinoasa tachi-yukebaokuretaruare ka kohinamutabi nareba15kimi ka shinubamuihamu subesemu sube shiraniashihikinoyama no konure ni20hafutsutanowakare no amatawoshiku mo aru ka mo.

Mi Yoshinu no1maki-tatsu yama nishizhi ni ofuruyama suga no ne nonemokoro ni5waga ’mofu kimi haohokimi nomake no manimanihinazakarukimi wosame ni to10muratorinoasa tachi-yukebaokuretaruare ka kohinamutabi nareba15kimi ka shinubamuihamu subesemu sube shiraniashihikinoyama no konure ni20hafutsutanowakare no amatawoshiku mo aru ka mo.

Mi Yoshinu no1

maki-tatsu yama ni

shizhi ni ofuru

yama suga no ne no

nemokoro ni5

waga ’mofu kimi ha

ohokimi no

make no manimani

hinazakaru

kimi wosame ni to10

muratorino

asa tachi-yukeba

okuretaru

are ka kohinamu

tabi nareba15

kimi ka shinubamu

ihamu sube

semu sube shirani

ashihikino

yama no konure ni20

hafutsutano

wakare no amata

woshiku mo aru ka mo.

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Mi Yoshinu no1Mikane no take nima naku soame ha furu chifutokizhiku so5yuki ha furu chifusono ame noma naki ga gotosono yuki notokizhiku ga goto10ma mo ochizuare ha so kofuruimo ga tadaka ni.

Mi Yoshinu no1Mikane no take nima naku soame ha furu chifutokizhiku so5yuki ha furu chifusono ame noma naki ga gotosono yuki notokizhiku ga goto10ma mo ochizuare ha so kofuruimo ga tadaka ni.

Mi Yoshinu no1Mikane no take nima naku soame ha furu chifutokizhiku so5yuki ha furu chifusono ame noma naki ga gotosono yuki notokizhiku ga goto10ma mo ochizuare ha so kofuruimo ga tadaka ni.

Mi Yoshinu no1

Mikane no take ni

ma naku so

ame ha furu chifu

tokizhiku so5

yuki ha furu chifu

sono ame no

ma naki ga goto

sono yuki no

tokizhiku ga goto10

ma mo ochizu

are ha so kofuru

imo ga tadaka ni.

Uchihisatsu1Miyake no hara nihita tsuchi niashi fumi tsuranenatsukusa wo5koshi ni nadzumiikanaru yahito no ko yuwe sokayohasu mo agoubena ubena10haha ha shirazuubena ubenachichi ha shirazuminanowatakaguroki kami ni15ma yufu mochiazane yuhitariYamato notsuge no wo-gushiosahe sasu20shikitahe no ko hasore so aga tsuma!

Uchihisatsu1Miyake no hara nihita tsuchi niashi fumi tsuranenatsukusa wo5koshi ni nadzumiikanaru yahito no ko yuwe sokayohasu mo agoubena ubena10haha ha shirazuubena ubenachichi ha shirazuminanowatakaguroki kami ni15ma yufu mochiazane yuhitariYamato notsuge no wo-gushiosahe sasu20shikitahe no ko hasore so aga tsuma!

Uchihisatsu1Miyake no hara nihita tsuchi niashi fumi tsuranenatsukusa wo5koshi ni nadzumiikanaru yahito no ko yuwe sokayohasu mo agoubena ubena10haha ha shirazuubena ubenachichi ha shirazuminanowatakaguroki kami ni15ma yufu mochiazane yuhitariYamato notsuge no wo-gushiosahe sasu20shikitahe no ko hasore so aga tsuma!

Uchihisatsu1

Miyake no hara ni

hita tsuchi ni

ashi fumi tsurane

natsukusa wo5

koshi ni nadzumi

ikanaru ya

hito no ko yuwe so

kayohasu mo ago

ubena ubena10

haha ha shirazu

ubena ubena

chichi ha shirazu

minanowata

kaguroki kami ni15

ma yufu mochi

azane yuhitari

Yamato no

tsuge no wo-gushi

osahe sasu20

shikitahe no ko ha

sore so aga tsuma!

9ago, my prince.

17 Various explanations are given of this word—Keichiu givesasasa, like (asasais a sp. of Limnanthemum); Okabe readskazashi, adorn; Motowori suggests the meaning adopted by the Kogi, and in my translation, i.e.asane no kami=nekutare-gami.Azane, however, may be perhaps better connected withazanafu, to bind up.

Foruchihisatsu,minanowatasee List m. k.

Tamatasuki1kakenu toki nakuaga ’moheruimo ni shi ahanebaakanesasu5hiru shimiraninubatamanoyoru ha sugara nii mo nezu niimo ni kofuru ni10ikeru subenashi.

Tamatasuki1kakenu toki nakuaga ’moheruimo ni shi ahanebaakanesasu5hiru shimiraninubatamanoyoru ha sugara nii mo nezu niimo ni kofuru ni10ikeru subenashi.

Tamatasuki1kakenu toki nakuaga ’moheruimo ni shi ahanebaakanesasu5hiru shimiraninubatamanoyoru ha sugara nii mo nezu niimo ni kofuru ni10ikeru subenashi.

Tamatasuki1

kakenu toki naku

aga ’moheru

imo ni shi ahaneba

akanesasu5

hiru shimirani

nubatamano

yoru ha sugara ni

i mo nezu ni

imo ni kofuru ni10

ikeru subenashi.

9, 10imo,i mo.

Fortamatasuki,akanesasu,nubatamanosee List m. k.

Mi-watashi ni1imora ha tatashikono kata niare ha tachiteomufu sora5yasukaranaku ninageku sorayasukaranaku nisaninuri nowo-bune mo ga mo10tama-maki nowo-kaji mo ga mokogi-wataritsutsu mokatarahamashi wo.

Mi-watashi ni1imora ha tatashikono kata niare ha tachiteomufu sora5yasukaranaku ninageku sorayasukaranaku nisaninuri nowo-bune mo ga mo10tama-maki nowo-kaji mo ga mokogi-wataritsutsu mokatarahamashi wo.

Mi-watashi ni1imora ha tatashikono kata niare ha tachiteomufu sora5yasukaranaku ninageku sorayasukaranaku nisaninuri nowo-bune mo ga mo10tama-maki nowo-kaji mo ga mokogi-wataritsutsu mokatarahamashi wo.

Mi-watashi ni1

imora ha tatashi

kono kata ni

are ha tachite

omufu sora5

yasukaranaku ni

nageku sora

yasukaranaku ni

saninuri no

wo-bune mo ga mo10

tama-maki no

wo-kaji mo ga mo

kogi-wataritsutsu mo

katarahamashi wo.

In one edition the lay begins with the fourth verse; in another the opening is—Komoriku no|Hatsuse no kaha no|wochi kata ni|imora ha tatashi—representing the girl (imora) as standing on the further (distant) bank (wochi-kata) of the rapid stream of Hatsusè.

Oshiteru1Naniha no saki nihiki-noboruake no sohobunesohobune ni5tsuna torikakehikodzurahiari nami suredoari nami yezuihare nishi agami.10

Oshiteru1Naniha no saki nihiki-noboruake no sohobunesohobune ni5tsuna torikakehikodzurahiari nami suredoari nami yezuihare nishi agami.10

Oshiteru1Naniha no saki nihiki-noboruake no sohobunesohobune ni5tsuna torikakehikodzurahiari nami suredoari nami yezuihare nishi agami.10

Oshiteru1

Naniha no saki ni

hiki-noboru

ake no sohobune

sohobune ni5

tsuna torikake

hikodzurahi

ari nami suredo

ari nami yezu

ihare nishi agami.10

The text is obscure.

4ake, red.soho buneis red ship.

8ari nami=ari nabiki. There is a play upon thisari namiand the same expression in 9.

7 Lengthened form ofhikotsuru, go on hauling. Soihidzurahi=ihitsuru(K. 343).

9ari namiis explained (Motowori) as =inamu, refuse, object;ihare nishi agami= such is what I bid you.

Kamukazeno1Ise no umi noasa nagi niki-yoru fukamiruyufu nagi ni5ki-yoru matamirufukamirunofukameshi are womatamirunomata yuki-kaheri10tsuma toihazhi to ka moomohoseru kimi.

Kamukazeno1Ise no umi noasa nagi niki-yoru fukamiruyufu nagi ni5ki-yoru matamirufukamirunofukameshi are womatamirunomata yuki-kaheri10tsuma toihazhi to ka moomohoseru kimi.

Kamukazeno1Ise no umi noasa nagi niki-yoru fukamiruyufu nagi ni5ki-yoru matamirufukamirunofukameshi are womatamirunomata yuki-kaheri10tsuma toihazhi to ka moomohoseru kimi.

Kamukazeno1

Ise no umi no

asa nagi ni

ki-yoru fukamiru

yufu nagi ni5

ki-yoru matamiru

fukamiruno

fukameshi are wo

matamiruno

mata yuki-kaheri10

tsuma to

ihazhi to ka mo

omohoseru kimi.

10yuki-kaheri, the coming and passing (of months and days, i.e. of time).

11, 13tsumaandkimiare not the same person.

Forkamukazeno,fukamiruno,matamirunosee List, m. k.

Ki no kuni no1Muro no ye no be nichi tose nitsutsumu koto nakuyorodzu yo ni5kaku shi mo aramu toohobunenoomohi-tanomiteide-tachi nokiyoki nagisa ni10asa nagi niki-yoru fukamiruyufu nagi niki-yoru naha-norifukamiruno15fukameshi koranahanorinohikaba tayu to yasado-hito noyuki no tsudohi ni20nakukonasuyuki tori-saguriadzusayumiyuhara furi-okoshishishiki ya wo25futatsu tabasamihanachikemuhito shi kuyashi mokofuraku ’moheba!

Ki no kuni no1Muro no ye no be nichi tose nitsutsumu koto nakuyorodzu yo ni5kaku shi mo aramu toohobunenoomohi-tanomiteide-tachi nokiyoki nagisa ni10asa nagi niki-yoru fukamiruyufu nagi niki-yoru naha-norifukamiruno15fukameshi koranahanorinohikaba tayu to yasado-hito noyuki no tsudohi ni20nakukonasuyuki tori-saguriadzusayumiyuhara furi-okoshishishiki ya wo25futatsu tabasamihanachikemuhito shi kuyashi mokofuraku ’moheba!

Ki no kuni no1Muro no ye no be nichi tose nitsutsumu koto nakuyorodzu yo ni5kaku shi mo aramu toohobunenoomohi-tanomiteide-tachi nokiyoki nagisa ni10asa nagi niki-yoru fukamiruyufu nagi niki-yoru naha-norifukamiruno15fukameshi koranahanorinohikaba tayu to yasado-hito noyuki no tsudohi ni20nakukonasuyuki tori-saguriadzusayumiyuhara furi-okoshishishiki ya wo25futatsu tabasamihanachikemuhito shi kuyashi mokofuraku ’moheba!

Ki no kuni no1

Muro no ye no be ni

chi tose ni

tsutsumu koto naku

yorodzu yo ni5

kaku shi mo aramu to

ohobuneno

omohi-tanomite

ide-tachi no

kiyoki nagisa ni10

asa nagi ni

ki-yoru fukamiru

yufu nagi ni

ki-yoru naha-nori

fukamiruno15

fukameshi kora

nahanorino

hikaba tayu to ya

sado-hito no

yuki no tsudohi ni20

nakukonasu

yuki tori-saguri

adzusayumi

yuhara furi-okoshi

shishiki ya wo25

futatsu tabasami

hanachikemu

hito shi kuyashi mo

kofuraku ’moheba!

1-6 express the situation of the lover; 12-18 describe the sea-weeds on the names of which the thought of the lay is made to turn.

17 is m. k. ofhikaba, which refers to the breaking of the connexion.

20yukiis connected withtsudohi, assemble =yukite tsudohite.

21 is m. k. of 22.

21-26 is a prefatial m. k. ofhanachikemu.

22yukiI take to be quiver, but having as homophon (yuki, go, prefix totori saguri, search, look for) the epithetnakuko nasu—the idea being that of a child crying because it cannot find some treasure it has lost.

23 is m. k. ofyu[hara]=yumi no suwe.

25shishiki yais taken as =shishi-ya, game-arrow, hunter’s arrow.

26futatsurefers toshishi ya.tabasamiis to take in the hand.

27hanachikemu, to let fly.

28hitois error forware.

23-26 seem to be a preface tohanachikemu.

Forohobuneno,fukamiruno,nahanorino,nakukonasu,adzusayumisee List m. k. Of course the above explanations are more or less conjectural. The lay is a poor affair enough, but the text is interesting on account of its complications.


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