OUR SUPPLEMENT STORY COMPETITIONS.STORIES IN MINIATURE.A SAILOR'S BRIDE.First Prize(£2 2s.).Florence Makin, Sheffield.Second Prize(£1 1s.).Una, Worlingworth, Wickham Market.Third Prize(10s. 6d.).Margaret Moscrop, Saltburn-by-the-Sea.Honourable Mention.Conor, Bonchurch, Isle of Wight; Esperance, Bridge of Allan; E. C. Harding, Dorking; Eleanor L. Harding, Dorking; Mary Lilla Harriss, Hackney, N.E.; Edythe Hoare, Leamington, Spa; Janet B. Imrie, Castle Douglas; Letitia E. May, Alton, Hants.; Mayfield, Llandaff; Annie S. Murphy, Tullow; Cecile Rahier, Brest, France; Ruby Smiley, Ballyclare, co. Antrim; Eva M. Waldren, Basingstoke; Wild-Thyme, Edinburgh; May Adèle Venn, W. Kensington Park.To the Competitors.My dear Girls,—Let me thank you all very much for the many pleasant pages I have read.In reading your essays, I have fancied that there are some future story-tellers among you, who will be ready to take up our pens when we lay them aside.In every phase of life we see that all cannot be successful at the same time; but such competitions as these bring eventual success to the strong ones, who have faith and courage to try again. I feel sure that "miniature"handwritingwas not a feature of the competition! and hope that in other efforts no young eyes will be so cruelly taxed as some have been in this.My warmest wishes for the future success of those not successful to-day; and congratulations to the winners.Your cordial friend,Minnie Douglas.THE BACK OF BEYOND.First Prize(£2 2s.).Annie E. Mellor, Hereford.Second Prize(£1 1s.).Annie Ascough, Scarborough.Third Prize(10s. 6d.).Helen Rickards, Dixton Vicarage, Monmouth.Honourable Mention."Hermia," Colchester; Janet M. Pugh, Towyn; Louisa A. M. Mathew, Beckenham; Mary F. Howard, Oxford; Amy Miller, Brixton Hill; J. Ebdell, Wakefield; Nellie Cobham, Folkestone; Kate Kelsey, Bristol; Minnie Highton, Norwood; "Greta," Manchester; Lottie L. Creighton, Gorey; L. Harper, Belfast; Ada Browning, Limehouse, E.; Effie Mackintosh, Instow; Abigail Binns, Rochdale; Jessie Hickling, Sydenham; Mrs. Evelyn Upton, West Brighton; C. Winifred Dyer, Wandsworth; "Shamrock," Hyde Park; Annie F. Hepple, North Shields; Alice J. E. Mosley, Wentworth; Sophie Gardner, Richmond Hill; J. B. C., Fauldhouse; Lilian A. G. Slade, Crewkerne; H. Marjory Ingle, Ely; Eleanor Mary Ralls, Bridport; Maud Wilson, Belfast; C. Winifred James, Crown Hill; Margaret Christina Haynes, Bristol.To the Competitors.My dear Girls,—As summaries, your stories could hardly have been better. It is clear that, in organising the Competition, the Editor has been doing real educational work. You are acquiring a selective faculty: you are learning to distinguish between the detail and the design. Practice—this sounds arithmetical—is teaching you proportion. This critical power will stand you in good stead—in life as well as in letters.But on some other points I cannot be quite so congratulatory. There is a good deal of adventurous spelling, and there is much distracted punctuation. Many of the miniatures are nearly large enough for family portraits.And, while the stories are admirable skeletons, they seem—as skeletons are apt to prove in society—a little deficient in ease and grace, jerky and unpersuasive. Some, I am almost afraid, are rather dry, and even a little dull.Girls, don't you think that, in dealing with a tale that was meant as a concession to the holiday spirit—a little interlude between more serious efforts—you might have accepted with less reserve the Editor's invitation to be bright?And I should like to see you aiming at some distinction of style. Some of the stories reminded me of telegrams, some of strings of beads. Still, a good many are crisp and neat, and a few have quite a pretty touch.The winner of the first prize, I must add, came very near to being disqualified on account of her sugared and beguiling words. On full reflection, however, her paper being much the best in point of sprightliness andverve, I decided, after making a conscientiously wry face, to absorb the saccharine matter. But, another time, she must not put bouquets on the judge's table.With congratulations to many, and hearty thanks to all,Ever most truly yours,Frederick Langbridge.⁂ Unfortunately we have no space for printing the first prize essays this month.—Ed.
STORIES IN MINIATURE.
First Prize(£2 2s.).
Florence Makin, Sheffield.
Second Prize(£1 1s.).
Una, Worlingworth, Wickham Market.
Third Prize(10s. 6d.).
Margaret Moscrop, Saltburn-by-the-Sea.
Honourable Mention.
Conor, Bonchurch, Isle of Wight; Esperance, Bridge of Allan; E. C. Harding, Dorking; Eleanor L. Harding, Dorking; Mary Lilla Harriss, Hackney, N.E.; Edythe Hoare, Leamington, Spa; Janet B. Imrie, Castle Douglas; Letitia E. May, Alton, Hants.; Mayfield, Llandaff; Annie S. Murphy, Tullow; Cecile Rahier, Brest, France; Ruby Smiley, Ballyclare, co. Antrim; Eva M. Waldren, Basingstoke; Wild-Thyme, Edinburgh; May Adèle Venn, W. Kensington Park.
To the Competitors.
My dear Girls,—Let me thank you all very much for the many pleasant pages I have read.
In reading your essays, I have fancied that there are some future story-tellers among you, who will be ready to take up our pens when we lay them aside.
In every phase of life we see that all cannot be successful at the same time; but such competitions as these bring eventual success to the strong ones, who have faith and courage to try again. I feel sure that "miniature"handwritingwas not a feature of the competition! and hope that in other efforts no young eyes will be so cruelly taxed as some have been in this.
My warmest wishes for the future success of those not successful to-day; and congratulations to the winners.
Your cordial friend,Minnie Douglas.
First Prize(£2 2s.).
Annie E. Mellor, Hereford.
Second Prize(£1 1s.).
Annie Ascough, Scarborough.
Third Prize(10s. 6d.).
Helen Rickards, Dixton Vicarage, Monmouth.
Honourable Mention.
"Hermia," Colchester; Janet M. Pugh, Towyn; Louisa A. M. Mathew, Beckenham; Mary F. Howard, Oxford; Amy Miller, Brixton Hill; J. Ebdell, Wakefield; Nellie Cobham, Folkestone; Kate Kelsey, Bristol; Minnie Highton, Norwood; "Greta," Manchester; Lottie L. Creighton, Gorey; L. Harper, Belfast; Ada Browning, Limehouse, E.; Effie Mackintosh, Instow; Abigail Binns, Rochdale; Jessie Hickling, Sydenham; Mrs. Evelyn Upton, West Brighton; C. Winifred Dyer, Wandsworth; "Shamrock," Hyde Park; Annie F. Hepple, North Shields; Alice J. E. Mosley, Wentworth; Sophie Gardner, Richmond Hill; J. B. C., Fauldhouse; Lilian A. G. Slade, Crewkerne; H. Marjory Ingle, Ely; Eleanor Mary Ralls, Bridport; Maud Wilson, Belfast; C. Winifred James, Crown Hill; Margaret Christina Haynes, Bristol.
To the Competitors.
My dear Girls,—As summaries, your stories could hardly have been better. It is clear that, in organising the Competition, the Editor has been doing real educational work. You are acquiring a selective faculty: you are learning to distinguish between the detail and the design. Practice—this sounds arithmetical—is teaching you proportion. This critical power will stand you in good stead—in life as well as in letters.
But on some other points I cannot be quite so congratulatory. There is a good deal of adventurous spelling, and there is much distracted punctuation. Many of the miniatures are nearly large enough for family portraits.
And, while the stories are admirable skeletons, they seem—as skeletons are apt to prove in society—a little deficient in ease and grace, jerky and unpersuasive. Some, I am almost afraid, are rather dry, and even a little dull.
Girls, don't you think that, in dealing with a tale that was meant as a concession to the holiday spirit—a little interlude between more serious efforts—you might have accepted with less reserve the Editor's invitation to be bright?
And I should like to see you aiming at some distinction of style. Some of the stories reminded me of telegrams, some of strings of beads. Still, a good many are crisp and neat, and a few have quite a pretty touch.
The winner of the first prize, I must add, came very near to being disqualified on account of her sugared and beguiling words. On full reflection, however, her paper being much the best in point of sprightliness andverve, I decided, after making a conscientiously wry face, to absorb the saccharine matter. But, another time, she must not put bouquets on the judge's table.
With congratulations to many, and hearty thanks to all,
Ever most truly yours,Frederick Langbridge.
⁂ Unfortunately we have no space for printing the first prize essays this month.—Ed.
SPECIAL NOTICE TO OUR READERS.RUTH LAMB.We earnestly desire all our subscribers to read our new Supplement Story"Friend or Self"issued simultaneously with this monthly part. As a guarantee of its interest and value it is enough to state that the writer of it is the girls' special favourite—Ruth Lamb, author of "In the Twilight Side by Side." In order that the beautiful story shall be well read and enjoyed, and the high teaching of it have its effect, we offer three prizes ofTwo Guineas,One Guinea, andHalf-a-Guineafor the three best papers on it. The essays are to give a brief account of the plot and action of the story in the Competitor's own words; in fact, each paper should be a carefully-constructedStory in Miniature, telling the reader in a few bright words whatThe Girl's Own Story Supplementfor the month is all about.One page of foolscap only is to be written upon, and is to be signed by the writer, followed by her full address, and posted to The Editor,Girl's Own Paper, in an unsealed envelope, with the words "Stories in Miniature" written on the left-hand top corner. Writers are cautioned against too small handwriting.The last day for receiving the papers is November 19th; and no papers can in any case be returned.Examiners:—The Author of the Story (Ruth Lamb), and the Editor ofThe Girl's Own Paper, who will send certificates signed by themselves to all those obtaining Prizes and Honourable Mention.
RUTH LAMB.
RUTH LAMB.
We earnestly desire all our subscribers to read our new Supplement Story
"Friend or Self"
issued simultaneously with this monthly part. As a guarantee of its interest and value it is enough to state that the writer of it is the girls' special favourite—Ruth Lamb, author of "In the Twilight Side by Side." In order that the beautiful story shall be well read and enjoyed, and the high teaching of it have its effect, we offer three prizes ofTwo Guineas,One Guinea, andHalf-a-Guineafor the three best papers on it. The essays are to give a brief account of the plot and action of the story in the Competitor's own words; in fact, each paper should be a carefully-constructedStory in Miniature, telling the reader in a few bright words whatThe Girl's Own Story Supplementfor the month is all about.
One page of foolscap only is to be written upon, and is to be signed by the writer, followed by her full address, and posted to The Editor,Girl's Own Paper, in an unsealed envelope, with the words "Stories in Miniature" written on the left-hand top corner. Writers are cautioned against too small handwriting.
The last day for receiving the papers is November 19th; and no papers can in any case be returned.
Examiners:—The Author of the Story (Ruth Lamb), and the Editor ofThe Girl's Own Paper, who will send certificates signed by themselves to all those obtaining Prizes and Honourable Mention.
FOOTNOTES:[A]Prov.XXV. II, "apples" in our translation being now generally thought to mean "oranges." The former fruit is not cultivated in Palestine.
FOOTNOTES:
[A]Prov.XXV. II, "apples" in our translation being now generally thought to mean "oranges." The former fruit is not cultivated in Palestine.
[A]Prov.XXV. II, "apples" in our translation being now generally thought to mean "oranges." The former fruit is not cultivated in Palestine.